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Policy or terms change email template

Notifying people about changes they may not welcome.

A policy change email should state what is changing, when it takes effect, and what the reader needs to do, in that order and in the first three lines. Burying an unwelcome change inside pleasant framing is what causes the backlash.

At a glance

Use it whenTerms, pricing or a policy changes for existing users
Length150 to 250 words
ToneDirect and unspun
Ask forAny action needed, with a deadline

The template

Open in Mailplate

Subject lines that work with it

How to write this email well

Questions

How much notice should I give?

Thirty days is a common minimum for pricing and terms. Check what your jurisdiction and your own terms require.

Should I explain why?

One sentence. A long explanation invites debate on the reasoning rather than the change.

What if people are unhappy?

Expect it, and reply individually. A change communicated early and plainly recovers far better than one that felt hidden.

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Use this template in Gmail

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